Today was a making and doing day. However, during the day the tutors were going through our sketchbooks per table. Our session went on for about 2 hours including our break. Therefore we was barely able to get any work done because we were concentrating on going through our sketchbooks. I did really learn what I am doing, not wrong, but not correct. I learnt so much feedback, which has made me look at my sketchbook differently. I do wish I knew this information at the beginning before I started my sketchbook. I have realised that I need to look at my sketchbook more as a work book, and not just a record of all my work.
These were the notes that were written for me:

After the session, and when I went home. I created these drawings:
One of these drawings are following on from the session from yesterday.
However, I went a different direction and these are the pieces that I created ready for Thursdays presentation:
Theres the trail from the station to the university and using the building as a canvas. I did create a poster which is the image with type which shows that type will be at the start of the line, and it indicates that this is the way to the university.